by Anon88 » Wed May 09, 2018 12:15 pm
This story left me mostly very disappointed. I'm happy to support hyper preg writers but this wasn't really sexy and didn't feel like a pregnancy story at all. After the decent start in chapter 2 it devolved into what reads to me like mediocre weight gain story, just endless gorging on food and belly growing (but very little/bad descriptions of the belly/womb), like the whole pregnancy has been forgotten. There's none of the fertility/pregnancy/sex aspect normally present in a hyper preg story to be seen here.